CET4/6 Composition Promotion
在上一篇文章https://blog.csdn.net/weixin_45812669/article/details/109195100中介绍了一些关于写作文的小技巧，也就是标准的应试“八股文”，但要写出一篇优秀的作文光靠生硬的照搬和衔接是完全不够的。你是否还在写通篇简单句呢？好的长句才是要写出高分作文的精髓。因此，在本文中，小编将针对写作中的长句写法进行介绍，希望对大家提升写作有帮助！
Tip 1：
名词 + 修饰成分（who/which/that构成定语从句），也就是我们常说的限制性定语从句。
who/which/that代替前面的名词在定语充当主语或宾语。
e.g.1 Chinese students who have been learning English for over a decade still cannot/fail to/hardly communicate with foreigners naturally.
e.g.2 The university ranking system which have been carried out / practiced for long has aroused hot / heated / wide debate among/of the public.
e.g.3 A mounting / growing number of digital products which greatly satisfy people’s spiritual demand are more likely to grow in popularity.
Tip 2：
主语 + 谓语 + 宾语，which句子，也就是我们常说的非限制性定语从句。
即对前面的句子补充说明。
e.g.1 Excessive surfing online does harm to our body and mind,which is agreed by majority of parents.
相信大家这个是用的最多的，也是最容易上手写的，小栗子就不举那么多啦。
Tip 3：
名词 + 修饰成分（V-ed，V-ing，to do短语）非谓语短语作后置定语。
| V-ed | 被动，过去，已经完成 |
|---|---|
| V-ing | 主动，现在，正在进行 |
| to do不定式 | 目的，将来 |
这个技巧真的墙裂推荐大家要掌握并要用起来鸭！！超级加分强调，几乎所有我上过课的老师都在为它打call。
举个栗子对比一下，
e.g.1 谋杀了总统的人被判了死刑。
- The man who murdered the president was sentenced to death.
- The man having murdered the president was sentenced to death.
针对having murdered 解释：有朋友肯定有疑惑，having + 过去分词，是不能作后置定语的，而这里为什么这样用呢？这里的having完成式强调的是分词动作发生在谓语动作之前，谋杀是在宣判死刑前已经成立，已经发生了。
e.g.2 The lucky number recognized by majority of (别再用many,most) people normally / generally(别再用usually) associated with / related to / tied to / linked to(与…相关) fortune and career.
e.g.3 E-books favored by most of young people are becoming popular.
Tip 4：
并列宾语从句，主语 + that 从句1 + that 从句2 +that 从句3，表达一类人对于主题的类似看法。
这个技巧很明显在写论述文时非常加分，比如要写一些人认为上网有好处，上网的优缺点，类似这种文章，相信大家和我一样，还在写这些人认为有上网有好处1，认为有好处2这样的简单句构成，而其实这可以通过一句话就搞定。举个栗子，
e.g.1 Teenagers maintain / assume / hold the view / consider (千万别再用think啦！) that Internet has been providing diverse / various(替换 many，a lot of ) ways to obtaining(换掉get) information related to everyone’s study and career,that they can make more new friends through millions of websites,even their soul mates for life; that a variety of daily necessities are easily purchased(替换buy) online, which they value most.
Tip 5：
非谓语（V-ed / V-ing / to do ) 成分，主语 + 谓语 + 宾语
e.g.1 Greatly impacted by Star War, he decides /determined to devote / commit himself to the production of sci-fi flim.
e.g.2 Faced with gradual global warming, we must take immediate action to protect the environment.
e.g.3 To secure / obtain a prior position/status,most of universities are inclined to adopt some positive ways.
Tip 6：
形式主语：
It is/was +adj/V-ed that句子
| It is reported that | 据报道 |
|---|---|
| It is estimated that | 据估计 |
| It must be admitted that | 必须承认的是 |
| It is agreed/commonly-agreed that | 普遍认同的是 |
| It should be realized | 必须意识的是 |
| It is suggested that | 有人建议，表明 |
| It cannot be denied that | 不可否认的是 |
| It has been found that | 人们发现 |
e.g.1 It must be admitted that modern lifestyle has been impacted to Internet.
Tip 7：
同位语从句，对前面补充说明
一般跟在很有标志性的名词后面，一般由whether 和that 引导，通常that 不能省略。
标志性名词：
hope,fact,answer,problem…
注意如demand，wish，suggestion，resolution灯某些名词后面的同位语从句要用虚拟语气。
e.g.1 They expressed the wish that she accept the award.
e.g.2 We draw a conclusion that it is unwise to overuse the game pad.
e.g.3 He referred to Copernicus’s statement that earth moves round the sun.
Tip 8：
强调句型
It is/was + 被强调部分 +that / who +其他部分
注：即使被强调部分为状语，也只能用that,而不能用when, where,how,why…
e.g.1 It was Lily that I met at the railway station yesterday.
e.g.2 It was not until his wife came back that he went to bed.
一般在写作时，如果我要想强调某物的重要性的时候，就会想到使用强调句句型。
Tip 9：
倒装句
倒装句又分为全部倒装和部分倒装，并且Only,not only…but also,hardly / scarcely…when…No sooner…than…和表否定含义的词（no,not,never,seldom,little,hardly,at no time,in no way,not until)放在句首要部分倒装,as,though引导倒装句,so…that句型So 位于句首倒装，虚拟语气中were,had,should移到主语前省略if部分倒装。
由于这种技巧使用时容易出错，画蛇添足，所有建议大家在没有把握的时候，就不写。
不过也可以记住一些常见实用的记忆性倒装句。
比如 Only in this way, can we learn English well.
作文板块就介绍到这里啦！如何将文章写的通顺连贯又不失可读性，其实主要要写好作文还是要靠练滴，练作文都话，推荐大家可以上批改网练习，另外，多看优秀的作文学习，并且有意识的要用想写下的词可不可以替换成另一个高级的词汇或短语，修饰好你的文章。
That is all in term of composition ,thanks for reading !